blog 13

In doing both sides of desribing i saw that the way you sit down and put into words something that you are describing can change the readers view on the place. if i were to focus on all the positive aspects and even word some of the negative aspects as something positive the reader will see the atrium as a good and fun place. but then if i start describing it in a negative way and only say that it is uncomforatble and not a very friendly atmosphere then no one would like it. this tells me something. the next time i read some sort of critic on somethingi have to take into effect who is talking. they may not like one aspect and put the whole thing down, so i have to think for myself. also i think a paper would be more relliable if they include both sides of a story instead of being completely about only one side.