Blog 9

The audience I was imagining in my literacy narrative was my peers but most importantly my professor. The one thing that I really did try to have was an attention grabber. I introduced my paper with a story of sitting in a class. The reason I chose this story was because my targeted audience was in a class, they could visualize it better. I then reveal the topic of the paper not in the first paragraph but in the second. However I did not completely talk about everything I was going to talk about. I more of got the reader for the topics to come and only introduced the next paragraph. So I basically wrote that I switch languages without knowing but I never say how often or what exactly I mean. I leave that for the rest of the paper. I think I provided enough information in the introduction. If anything I believe I could have added more in a different part of the paper. The strategy I used was the use of a story, either funny or suspenseful, to grab the reader and then cause them to want more of an explanation. For my title I am not to confident about. I thought I could come up with something more grabbing and original. However, it was my first time really looking for a good title so I will know how to approach finding a title if I decide to revise it.